Re:Competition Comparison

Hello,

I recently send you an email regarding Competition Comparison Let me know if you are interested and we can discuss this further.

I look forward to your mail to your response.

 

Regards,

Mark

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From: info@pagesearch.biz [mailto:info@pagesearch.biz]
Sent: Monday, January 9, 2017 9:34 PM
To: 'mercedes.thompson@cbre.com'
Subject: Competition Comparison

 

Hello,

I hope you are well!

My name is Mark and I am a Digital Specialists for a Creative Agency.

I was doing some industry benchmarking for a client of mine when I came across your website.

I noticed a few technical errors which correspond with a drop of website traffic over the last 6-8 months which I thought I would bring to your attention.

After closer inspection it appears your site is lacking in 4 key criteria

 

1- Website Speed

2- Link Diversity

3- Domain Authority

4- Competition Comparison

 

I can send you over the report which shows all of the above and so much more which will help you at least improve your site, its rankings and traffic.

I would love the chance to help as well however; this report will at least give you a gauge on the quality of what I do.

 

Is this the best email to send it to?

 

Regards,

Mark